You were sweet sixteen.

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Sweet sixteen going on

Reaching to seventeen,

So much not yet seen
don’t know what do,

Or where to go,

What you want,

but sometimes no doubt,

About it too

the Joy and tears so close,
where Love and heartbreak are hand in hand

parents still in command…
Sometimes completely lost

and you in need of someone to guide you.
I’ll guide because you’re my friend  

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  • drelayaraja on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice sixteen. I like evergreen eighteen.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 20, 2009

    i still am
    my mind stopped growing at 16
    lovely

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice sentiment but, friends, don’t get in the parents’ way.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009

    Good work.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 21, 2009

    lh is 16 plus x

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