True love’s sweet surrender.

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Your dark, almond eyes
Twin pools of liquid onyx
Ensnaring my soul

Your sensuous mouth
Ravishing my peaks and valleys
Tantalizing me

Your large, calloused hands
Gliding upon my sensitive skin
Softly stroking

Your velvet stalk
Quivering deep within me
An intimate caress

Your hot breath
Upon my neck
A breathless gasp

Your strong arms
Gently cradling
Sweet surrender

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  • Daghost413860 on Apr 4, 2009

    Sexy! well written. Is it hot in heeere? :P

  • Shirley Shuler on Apr 4, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, Sweet Surrender, once again, you describe love so well!!

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