Unfaithfulness…

Take me or leave me,

but don’t ask me to believe,

late at night when you come home, another essence I perceive.

Take me or leave me,

If I’m not awake just let me dream,

don’t you kiss my forehead you know I heard the door,

guilt is in your kisses from what you did before.

You admire me because I hush and stare up at the sky,

because sadly you don’t see me cry.

And you begin to feel smaller day by day,

and when I look at you, you just look away.

Take me or leave me,

I’ll give up and I won’t spy,

but leave the nest that we created

in case you say goodbye.

You’re still here because you think I’m unaware,

but on your skin I’ve seen her prints; I see them everywhere.

And when I take a glimpse inside your eyes, I see the truth that you deny.

Take me or leave me,

And if you return bring back with you all the traits,

bring the truth so I can see;

my opponent, your “bed mate”.

And if she’s better I won’t fight, at last you’ll get to see me, cry.

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  • OhSugar on Sep 6, 2009

    Love your poem. There is so much truth in those words, ‘take me or leave me.’ I don’t understand cheating. If a person doesn’t want another, no one is holding a gun to their heads to make them stay. Life is too short to live in misery, time to move on to a brighter future.

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Sep 6, 2009

    thanks ohsugar, I totally agree with you

  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 6, 2009

    Wonderfully expressed and creative poem Johanny! Welcome back!!!You certainly have a true sense of poetic spirit in you!Your wording is always beautiful! Although I think you should toss the tosser lol tosser is a brit term for loser.

  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 6, 2009

    Welcome back Johanny! Wonderfully expressed and creative wirte!!You certainly have a true sense of poetic spirit in you,always beautiful wording! Although I think you should toss the tosser out on his ass lol tosser is a term for loser in britian.Now see your poems always have so much feeling in them I wanna toss him for you lol

  • Jane Jane on Sep 7, 2009

    nice one.. You should leave him instead of him deciding to take you or leave you..=)

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 8, 2009

    What a tragic core to this piece.

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