Lift this mist up from out of my vision

where the haunted hounds roam

and the wild seeps in

break myself from its strangling hold

and release me into reality

a grasp that can truly take over me

play some feelings into my mind

where freedom doesn’t struggle against every chord

where there’s no twisting within the chimes

and i do not weep every single time

Rhiannon Beetlestone © Copyright 2010 All Rights Reserved

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  • drelayaraja on Oct 7, 2010

    Nice one..

  • NIYATI BHAT on Oct 7, 2010

    Absolutely amazing. Very dark…
    where freedom doesn’t struggle against every chord

    where there’s no twisting within the chimes

    and i do not weep every single time
    Loved these lines.. :)

  • Ethics0006 on Oct 7, 2010

    Good Poem

  • Kaye TM on Oct 7, 2010

    wow. cool poem!

  • Lord Banks on Oct 7, 2010

    A cracker well done. David.

  • shivedi on Oct 7, 2010

    Nice Post I Like IT :)

  • Joseph Scott on Oct 7, 2010

    lovely piece, good work :)

  • Tattoo3658we on Oct 7, 2010

    Nice share ;)

  • heidiefernandez on Oct 7, 2010

    beautifully done…. well written piece….

  • Noeal V on Oct 8, 2010

    Nice Share.

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