What we can gain and what we can give, makes life worth being.

Take from me, the substance of life.

My caring, my giving, my freedom of space.

Take it all in and keep it close.

As you grow to understand,

What one human sometimes, means to another.

To one who believes in them,

Sees them as a strong, dependable force.

One who can conquer mountains,

Who can tread water until,

Dry land, is almost in sight.

Draw from me, all that you need.

To be forever, the most that

Your life can ever be.

For I too, will take from you.

Together we will grow, as one.

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  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on May 17, 2011

    Lovely QV. Lovely.

  • quiet voice on May 17, 2011

    ….Thanks very much.

  • foxpete88 on May 17, 2011

    wonderful…thanks.-

  • quiet voice on May 17, 2011

    …….Thanks so much foxpete.

  • Vivek Ratan on May 18, 2011

    Sky like you are for me
    My dear you bring moon before me
    With your nice feelings you adore me
    You give me love and take love from me

    Very nice poem,quiet voice

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