My verse.

Being all new in the triond is felt like a new born baby.

new suuoundings, new peoples, immense motivation.

learning from other, i like it

new thoughts are still fighting,

mentor are guiding.

mistakes are still arising.

no sighn of learning is their,

another set of mistakes i have commited here,

faults are building up,

my motivation are jiggling up.

learing from other mistakes,

having fun on my stake,

upabove the word so high,

new boy in the triond guys……..

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Comments (8)
  • Suni51 on Jan 27, 2012

    Nice one.

  • MJRapp on Jan 27, 2012

    LOL! I’ve been here 2 months and I still think of myself as new.

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Jan 27, 2012

    Nicely written :)

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 27, 2012

    very good

  • ittech on Jan 27, 2012

    thanks for share

  • ittech on Jan 27, 2012

    oh good to know this…:)

  • ittech on Feb 19, 2012

    Wonderful piece of writing. This is mind-blowing stuff, my friend…

  • ittech on Feb 22, 2012

    fabulous

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