I watched a four-year old munching grapes. I was pretty well hidden behind a desk, so she felt alone.

I watched her covertly
Shy little mouse that she is
She had green grapes
In a plastic baggie.

Her grapes took a walk
They held a conversation.
Every now and then,
One would hop into her mouth.

Sweetness and innocence
Munching down good, green grapes;
Sweet green grapes walking and talking
Then going munch!

I’m sure there’s a lesson somewhere there
Beyond that children have imaginations
And can find a way to play if left alone
But it tickles my brain and lies just beyond it.

So I’ll just remember
A little girl not three feet high
With a brown, curly top-knot
Munching her talking grapes.

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  • ken bultman on Aug 6, 2009

    Clever poem. Don’t you talk to your food?

  • Ramalingam on Aug 6, 2009

    Nice poem.Thanks for sharing.

  • Brenda Nelson on Aug 6, 2009

    I use to have that kind of imagination.. talked to my stuffed animals, and had them talk back too. Cute story

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Aug 6, 2009

    I remember my son doing the same thing. Now he is grown and joining the Navy. It makes me sad for those early innocent days.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Aug 6, 2009

    This is VeRy GooD!!!!! Enjoyed this muches! Reminds me of things I used to do that irritated my dad.

    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • PR Mace on Aug 6, 2009

    Cute poem. I love to watch my granddaughter, Savanna eating a banana. She makes it an event.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 6, 2009

    Very cute, Daisy. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 6, 2009

    that’s neat, Daisy, Like my little granddaughter only shes about a foot taller.

  • George W Whitehead on Aug 7, 2009

    Lovely poem, Daisy.

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