Hi-yo, Silver.

The closeness of your stroke
Leaves nothing to chance
And no room for improvement
I’ve become a slave to a repeated feeling
Each night I want to escape
But the shackles around my wrist
Only allows me to move hips
And move they do
Up and down
Arching all around
Delight fills your eyes
As you wear down bucking
Enjoying the way
You withstood long lasting activity
Energetic at first
Then slow and prolific
Allowing the horn of my saddle
To ride you with ease
A penetrating feeling
Causing toes to cling to stirrups
Rising over hurdles
Completely resting on down slopes
Racing against the wind
The bed pounds with a gallop
Better than any mechanical toy
Excitement builds with pleasurable pain
Trying to hold out for a few seconds longer
Your hands reach around my neck
Riding for dear life
Squeezing the pillow beneath
Your body’s weight
Stabilizes my position
And your relaxed motion
Quells determination
Hot sexy whispers
Amplifies losing control
At last I am spent
Exclaiming! without a sound
Fist clenched
Legs tense
Squeezing what little bit of energy
I had left into you
Eyes rolled back
Then sight returned
Placing you back into view
Revealing a satisfied look  
As you tamed the wildness in me

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Comments (18)
  • chellsy on Feb 22, 2010

    another great share

  • Sharif Ishnin on Feb 22, 2010

    What a ride that was!(with a silent exclaimation.)☺

  • LoveDoctor on Feb 22, 2010

    That was great poetry and an incredible ride. good imagery.

  • Wiggles18 on Feb 22, 2010

    Great one. I like to let mine run free.

  • drelayaraja on Feb 23, 2010

    Nice poem. I like the title.

  • neet on Feb 23, 2010

    Nice one.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 23, 2010

    And she tames you all over again :) I can see who wears the pants in your house…lol!

  • willyonline on Feb 23, 2010

    Good sharing. Its nice way to communicate & increase good writing also gets best opportunity online through comments.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 23, 2010

    Wow! That’s too much for an old fogie like me first thing in the morning, lol. Brilliant work.

    Christine

  • johnnydod on Feb 23, 2010

    This was good yup very good

  • XXElleXX on Feb 23, 2010

    Oooo-la-la…hehehe…damn! I think I’ve said this to you before T.S.Lewis…you navigate the subject of sex and mutual love so well! Another erotic, sensual and harmonious piece that has been delicately woven together to give your readers/fans the ultimate poetic ride…you make textual sex so beautiful :-)

  • diamondpoet on Feb 23, 2010

    Thanks for heating up my morning, Great post.

  • AlmaG on Feb 23, 2010

    Wow! Great poem.

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 23, 2010

    Wow! That was one amazing ride!

  • Starpisces on Feb 23, 2010

    your this poem makes people imagine a lot… ha ha..
    well composed.
    (my 3rd attempt to comment)

  • giftarist on Feb 23, 2010

    Very good. I like this piece.

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 24, 2010

    A wild ride it was, Great way to go.

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 25, 2010

    A wildly passionate piece!

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