I feel this is a bit rushed but the words just flowed. so am not entirely happy with it.

As I lay my head upon your chest

I can feel your heartbeat,

gently beating in my ear

calming my soul, relaxing my body, 

as my heart beat gets in rhythm with yours. 

*

You kiss my head, play with my hair, 

as I look up at you, look into your eyes

which are filled with love and passion.

*

Our lips gently meet, so soft and sweet,

as we passionately kiss some more.

*

Hands start wondering, clothes coming off, 

being thrown all over the place, 

as our bodies gently embrace.

*

Laying down on the bed, 

getting tangled in the sheets, 

as our bodies, twist and turn,

till our bodies become one.

*

The sheets all, twisted and tangled, 

soon will be tidied, 

after our day of passion. 

*

krrymarie, 16.1.12

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Comments (4)
  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 16, 2012

    Young love, nothing like it.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 17, 2012

    A very passionate piece. It must be lovely to still feel like that.

  • krrymarie on Jan 17, 2012

    Thanks guys the words just came to me and flowed!

  • somiasom on Jan 21, 2012

    Good share. Thanks

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