I offer my humble thanks to Lovely Honey for giving me the two words “toffee and coffee”. These words immediately began leaping around in my head and turned into this little rhyme!

Thank you for this!

coffee toffee
what could be better?
lick it, suck it –
get your boost

hard and sweet
the perfect combo
coffee toffee
a welcome treat

toffee coffee
not for the kids
an adult indulgence -
you deserve it!

not in a cup
hold in your hand
suck it, lick it
ain’t that grand!

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Comments (9)
  • Bruce Officer on Nov 19, 2010

    I’m drooling at the mouth, damn you! :-P

  • Carolyn Cordon on Nov 19, 2010

    I love coffee, and every now and then a sweet thing to suck on or lick is lots of fun – Damn me all you want Bruce, you know you want it!

  • awesome11 on Nov 20, 2010

    Nice write dear ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • Judy Sheldon on Nov 20, 2010

    I like toffee but only like coffee a little. I used to drink it with loads of cream and sugar! ;-)

  • Carolyn Cordon on Nov 21, 2010

    Coffee with loads of cream and sugar is the path to self-hatred for some. As a sometimes treat though, that’s safe enough.
    Thanks for your comment Judy, and yours too awesome

  • Larry Fish on Nov 22, 2010

    Such a cute use of words, I enjoyed it very mcuh.

  • dino renaldo on Dec 4, 2010

    nice share thanks

  • imarkcasti on Dec 23, 2010

    almost erotic!

  • Carolyn Cordon on Dec 24, 2010

    I’m glad you could see the lightly erotic tinge to this little poem imarkcasti. That’s what I was aiming for – a slightly naughty but nice edge!

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