Tearful Goodbye

Darla Cooke on Jul 18, 2009

Tags: broken heart, depression, goodbye, tearful

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Saying goodbye is never easy.

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We said a very tearful goodbye,

then I watched you walk away.

Although my heart is broken,

I’ll find a way to stay strong.

Depression will not get me down,

for I will find someone new.

Still I miss you more each day,

no one can ever take your place.

I wish we could be together,

but that is never going to happen.

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Comments (8)

Ramalingam on Jul 18, 2009
Really parting is painful and mere empty words cannot console you.Thanks for sharing.
ken bultman on Jul 18, 2009
Plaintive.
Deep Blue on Jul 18, 2009
Deeply moving.
Tanya Wallace on Jul 18, 2009
I think we all feel like that when we lose someone.Wonderfully described poem, sad and heartfelt.
Michele on Jul 18, 2009
Very nice….
rajeev bhargava on Jul 18, 2009
it’s one of the hardest and most painful things when we watch someone we love just walk away heartlessly. I pray you find the strength to recover.
Milton H Peebles III on Jul 19, 2009
makes me think of the one that brings pain to my heart on sad days.

Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
fragile18 on Jul 26, 2009
goodbyes are not good. Sad. but i love the piece

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