Tears

withheld on Jan 26, 2010

Tags: drops, hurt, lonely, pain, paper, Tears

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Tears.

When the tears hit the paper

The writing’s hard to read

It signifies a point in your life

When its time to say goodbye

Let it all go

Let it all out

Being on your own

Is not so hard you know!

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Anurag02 on Jan 26, 2010
Good poem, nice write. Thank you!
clay hurtubise on Jan 26, 2010
You’ve always got your Triond friends!
Nice piece.
Thanks,
Clay
Stacey Watts on Jan 26, 2010
This was a beautiful poem. It is hard to say goodbye. I like the positive spin at the end.
Reilley on Jan 26, 2010
Very nicely done.
joyhyena29 on Jan 26, 2010
well done^^keep it up…
redmail99 on Jan 26, 2010
emotive….
Debra. on Jan 26, 2010
Lovely poem, Pablina, especially the ending.
Sushant94 on Jan 27, 2010
damn so short and yet so interesting and deep!
Christine Ramsay on Jan 27, 2010
A sad poem with an optimistic ending. It is not so hard to be alone. Lovely work.

Christine
albert1jemi on Jan 27, 2010
beautifully written

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