Haiku.

The earth drinks

     siphoning streams to the sea,

         as rain trickles down my cheek.

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  • ashan1614 on Oct 13, 2010

    And maybe, just maybe, it will rain to hide any evidence of tears. :)

  • ceegirl on Oct 13, 2010

    not much tears

  • Jamie Myles on Oct 13, 2010

    beautiful Hiaku

  • Starpisces on Oct 13, 2010

    well expressed one, Lewis.
    ^_^

  • giftarist on Oct 13, 2010

    Very nicely done.

  • Joie Schmidt on Oct 14, 2010

    Beautiful

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 14, 2010

    Very nice imagery.

  • Leanna C. Rose on Nov 9, 2010

    Thats cute !

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