A poem of that day.

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I can hear a voice,

Repeating through my mind,

Thinking about the strain.

One voice of reason,

Wanting to see her face,

Avoiding all the pain.

Wishing to take her home today,

A new life is on her way,

Pushing through the rain.

Tears of joy keep falling,

I hear her cry for the first time,

Everything will be okay.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 30, 2009

    nice one

  • Liz Sapphire on Dec 30, 2009

    =) True bliss. Splendid, thanks for sharing.

  • LoveDoctorGoodBye on Dec 30, 2009

    Beautiful. well-done.

  • qasimdharamsy on Dec 30, 2009

    Nice poem…good…

  • Valerie Curtiss on Dec 30, 2009

    Wonderful sentiments beautifully written

  • magicdarts on Dec 30, 2009

    the most powerful emotions any of us will ever go through – beautifully expressed!

  • Debra. on Dec 30, 2009

    Such a complete and most powerful feeling of joy! Beautiful, Alc!

  • AlmaG on Dec 30, 2009

    Oh wow! what a beautiful poem. I’m trying to imagine that day for me.. :)

  • Atanacio on Dec 30, 2009

    This was well written you have yet to disappoint :)

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 30, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • STEVE666 on Dec 30, 2009

    Great verse!

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 30, 2009

    Ah, if I read this poem correctly we have not only love and commitment but also new life. A perfect poem for the new year.

  • standingproud on Dec 30, 2009

    Simply lovely.
    :)

  • Eddie0flare on Dec 30, 2009

    amazing.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Dec 31, 2009

    Totally soothing to my soul. A Great way to welcome the New Year.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • lillyrose on Dec 31, 2009

    beautiful, great visual x

  • albert1jemi on Dec 31, 2009

    great poem

  • palak2008 on Jan 1, 2010

    Wonderful poem..

  • drelayaraja on Jan 2, 2010

    Great poem :)

  • francydiaz on Jan 11, 2010

    A beauty of poem

  • Aiyanna on Jan 31, 2010

    Just saw this and must say you summed it up well… :) Thank you for sharing…

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