Break up poem.

He loved me! I felt it! He said it…

Now nobody is talking to you…

You think you like what you’re doing but you know you don’t.

You want to change the life you’re living but you can’t.

All your friends are within except one…

The one and only you had before..

Your sacred grove, the one you worshiped before!

He took some of your tears away with him.

Some of your pains and fears parted with him..

But you’re left with the deepest pain…

It’s fierce and deafening….sharp and sickening.

It’s the drops of hot tears from your beautiful cheek….

The rush of salty water from sea of your heart!

THE TEARS OF THE FORGOTTEN

You had her! You knew her! You enjoyed her!

But now you’re a man alone…

You want to run away from this pain but it won’t let u!

You want to die but death has rejected you….

The love that once connected you to her has deleted you from the depths of her heart….

Your life is now in the hands of a kid casting stones away….

You want her back but you don’t know what to say…

You know you’re doomed already…

You’re about to be flushed ‘get ready’…

But you are not afraid of a quick death…

You want it badly and it isn’t coming…

You’re in coma you want it to end but you’re so helpless to take your own life!

You’re stunned like a chicken in trouble…

Cause you are bearing the mark of the forgotten…..

You are shedding the:

TEARS OF THE FORGOTTEN

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  • jamesII on Aug 29, 2010

    Beautiful! Loved the images and the voice! Brings the experience up close and personal! Good work! Keep on doing what you are doing! You are writing yourself a future, kid! Cool!

  • poem4love on Oct 2, 2010

    thanks jamesll. u guys are like the gods here…i am just a novice trying to be like u…thank u so much……

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