I think I wrote this one without really knowing what I was writing.

Every river and stream;
Flow like the blood in my veins;
Being the life source;
Of all that we know.

But what will happen?
If one day we cut off the life supply to our hearts;
And the rivers cease to flow;
What are we to do then?

Our eyes will swell with the tears we can never cry;
So hard we can try.

But how, can our rivers flow?
And how, can our scars not show?
The life source we need to survive.
Please return the tears to my eyes.

From this moment on;
What will tomorrow bring?
What else will be gone?
With what we need.

Your guess is as good as mine;
From rain drops to heart beats and voices from the top of the trees.
In danger of burning by fire.
Will the sun rise and set when the moon starts to burn in the sky?
To reflect through our eyes.

But how, can we not know?
And how, can the winds not blow?
The life source we need to survive.
Please return the tears to my eyes.

© Marie Milton

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  • lillyrose on Oct 6, 2009

    that was very beautiful Marie. Some very distinctive versing, lovely and sad at the same time. x

  • Katie Marie on Oct 6, 2009

    Oh, my!! An amazing write Marie. Don\\\\\\\’t have words for it.

  • Emma Green on Oct 6, 2009

    All I can say is “LOVED IT!”

  • maranatha on Oct 6, 2009

    Marie, the timber is strange and the form varies – but what a lovely, flowing write. Like a song; beautiful!

  • giftarist on Oct 7, 2009

    I like this one..
    you really have a hard time, dont you?

  • KristenKreashko on Oct 7, 2009

    Aww. I like it! :D

  • Jacques Berkeley on Oct 7, 2009

    Nice one.

  • Butterfly Musings on Oct 12, 2009

    very nice poem!! and great photo!

  • raptor22 on Oct 12, 2009

    A touching poem. Well done.

  • Theresa Johnson on Oct 12, 2009

    a very beautiful poem and the picture was a great choice for the piece….

  • drelayaraja on Nov 13, 2009

    great one. Good photo.

  • lillyrose on Jan 16, 2010

    still as beautiful xx

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