Wanting to know the one you love, longing for them to trust you fully and open up, to reveal their soul and give their heart.

Tell me what you’re thinking,
what’s hidden deep inside your mind.
Tell me the bad, the good, the scary,
I long to know your mind today.
Do not wait until you’re old and gray.

Whisper softly to my waiting heart,
open the gates to your mysterious soul.
Tell me all that is in your heart,
I will not pay a penny for your thoughts,
instead you will be rewarded with my eternal devotion.
Why wait for tomorrow?

Share your thoughts and I’ll share mine,
open up your heart to mine.
I want to know your tale,
tell me all the wonders hidden in truth,
the clock is ticking, swallowing our moment.

Tell me what you’re thinking,
judgement and pointing will not follow.
Make me your diary, let me share your journey.
Your secrets I will keep,
your sorrow I will share,
your happiness I will celebrate,
do not wait until you’re old and gray.

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Comments (6)
  • lapasan on Nov 6, 2010

    good post.

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 7, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • awesome11 on Nov 7, 2010

    great share! thanks!

  • Nina Mason on Nov 7, 2010

    Very nice poem.

  • Party Animal on Nov 7, 2010

    You write with passion and sincerity… :-)

  • Aiyanna on Nov 9, 2010

    A promise of eternal and everlasting friendship and love written with great passion and sincerity. To be able to trust you need to exorcise the demons of hurt and pain that made you distrust in the first place. The ability to fnd comfort in their company…

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