Religion that may have gone too far.

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Feelings tested,

emotions shot,

moral and religious rot

infected many,

tempers hot,

as this kind of deity would slaughter innocents,

because of what they might become,

what has God done,

can we hear the call,

maybe there would be a glimmer

of hope for us after all.

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  • Riano on Jun 9, 2009

    quick poem

  • Sammy2000 on Jun 9, 2009

    Religious rot… damn pa you went out there, but liked the poem anyways

  • Millie86 on Jun 9, 2009

    yeah i agree quick but good

  • Phelps33 on Jun 9, 2009

    I like this write

  • nekkoli on Jun 9, 2009

    Great d@m poetry, liked this!

  • RS Wing on Jun 10, 2009

    I always like to stir the religous pot , this is a well written start for sure!

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