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Temptation is a deadly sin,
it throws it’s self in to the wind.

Doubles back and stands in front of me,
willing my heart and my mind to see.

The sight of you makes a scramble to my very soul,
the alarm bells take their toll.

Are they loud enough for me to hear,
a sliver cord reaches out entwined with you so very near.

I fight tooth and nail,
for my heart not to set sail.

You feel it to as our eyes meet,
a ghost hand pushes my world to take a back seat.

Temptation is smiling at me,
she wont let me be brake free,
until she engulfs me.

Her lasso is round my spirit,
pushing me over the limit.

My heart beat quickens as both now electric blue cords meet,
has she made me that weak?

How this ends I will never tell………………..

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  • Darla Cooke on Feb 16, 2010

    Nice poem.

  • sambhafusia on Feb 16, 2010

    excellent share…interesting stuff, well written…keep it up…….

  • chellsy on Feb 16, 2010

    great poetry

  • neet on Feb 16, 2010

    Nice one.

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Feb 16, 2010

    Wow Cardy, another beautiful poem by you as I adored the ending as you left your reading audience to guess their own ending. Thank You oncce again ffr shring your wonddrful gift of writing but more importantly for feeding our appetite for more of you…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • albert1jemi on Feb 16, 2010

    excellent share

  • T. S. GARP on Feb 16, 2010

    The plight of temptation….. good poem!

  • Anj M on Feb 17, 2010

    Ofcourse women make men weak.

  • fragile18 on Feb 17, 2010

    nice one!

  • Lord Banks on Feb 17, 2010

    Temptation I’m good at resitinging certain things but others? thats another story! lovely poem. LB

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