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Tension

R G Lowry on Nov 17, 2009
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I wish I had never discovered tension.

Tension squeezes through my every vein

it wants to block and clot my brain

It is travelling around my body driving me insane

I want to be able to think clearly again

There is throbbing in my heart and mind

It is being wicked and ever so unkind

No matter what I do the tension will find

a way to barge in and not be left behind

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  • Pithom on Nov 17, 2009

    This is very good, especially the first half:

    “Tension squeezes through my every vein
    it wants to block and clot my brain
    It is travelling around my body driving me insane
    I want to be able to think clearly again”

    You pretty much said it all in this part alone.

    Thanks for sharing.

  • ceegirl on Nov 17, 2009

    thanks for sharing

  • Aleena on Nov 17, 2009

    Well-writen, nice :]

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