What is the scariest nightmare you ever had?

Wake me up from this terrible nightmare

Where I stood alone in the corner

Where darkness surrounds me

And cold chilling winds touches me

 

Wake me up from this terrible nightmare

Where not a sound I can hear

My body shivering from fear

Sweats trickling down my face

My heart beating a thousand pace

 

Wake me up from this terrible nightmare

Where my eyes were looking down on a body

Lying still, cold and bloody

Just like a wooden log

Lifeless, hard and empty

 

Wake me up from this terrible nightmare

As I saw a glimpse of my reflection

Standing alone in the dark

With a bloody knife in my hands

With a big smile on my face

Staring right back at me

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Comments (10)
  • LoveDoctor on Nov 11, 2009

    This is excellent poetry and imagery. good job.

  • svishnugopal on Nov 11, 2009

    i have had so many nightmares, but your imagination is at its peak i believe..very nice..thanks

  • Themax on Nov 11, 2009

    excellent poetry,Thank you :)

  • diamondpoet on Nov 11, 2009

    Nice poem, well written.

  • Jane Benitez on Nov 11, 2009

    A very descriptive passage in every line – nice poem!

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 11, 2009

    Great work!

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009

    Nice piece of work

  • Starpisces on Nov 12, 2009

    Well composed poem of nightmare! I ever dreamt someone wanted to kill me, and I hide under the bed and can see the killer’s legs moving around the bed searching for me…scary enough? There are worst ones but I forgot suddenly

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 12, 2009

    Well written, that is a very frightening picture.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 12, 2009

    Well done, hope I don’t have any nightmares like yours.

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