A poem for Duff’s writing challenge #16.

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I was walking alone in the forest,

on a quiet and beautiful Summer night.

A full moon glowed high in the sky,

casting its bright and silvery light.

 

That night a gentle breeze was blowing,

with a cool refreshing feel to the air.

As I strolled slowly through the forest,

the wind stirred my long black hair.

 

Night creatures crept among the trees,

crickets were chirping loudly nearby.

It was a peaceful and serene night,

with stars twinkling in the clear sky.

 

I walked along the well-worn path,

my spirit feeling wild and free.

I looked upon wondrous sights,

while rejoicing in nature’s beauty.

 

The serenity was disrupted by a rattle,

it was an ominous and scary sound.

My scream reached a deafening crescendo,

scaring the night creatures all around.

 

On the ground lay a huge coiled snake,

it was primed and ready to attack.

I stood there frozen on that spot,

too terrified to cautiously step back.

 

After many agonizing moments passed,

the snake finally slithered away.

I exhaled my breath very slowly,

happy to be alive for another day.

 

I continued on my way home,

watching every step that I took.

For that snake had frightened me,

and my whole body still shook.

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  • ken bultman on Dec 9, 2009

    Good one. Must watch out for ol’ Sneaky Snake.

  • Teves on Dec 9, 2009

    Very scary… http://www.articlespost.page.tl

  • Papa Sparks on Dec 9, 2009

    I also thought this was a good one.

  • Starpisces on Dec 9, 2009

    wonderful article!

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 9, 2009

    That would have scared me too. I don’t like snakes. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Lee Ness on Dec 9, 2009

    I do not like snakes either. Not easy topic to write about.
    You did very well on this one and picture was cool and sharp.
    Thanks for sharing
    Lee Ness

  • STEVE666 on Dec 9, 2009

    Great! Good luck in your challenge.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 9, 2009

    suggest to retain poems to be short and sweet

  • Francy on Dec 9, 2009

    Wonderful poem.
    Like it.
    Keep sharing.

  • Steven West on Dec 9, 2009

    Very gripping. Enjoyable poem.

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 9, 2009

    What is it about snakes that is so frightenning? The photo is perfect for the poem.

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 10, 2009

    I hate snakes. It frighten me too.

  • giftarist on Dec 10, 2009

    Enjoyed reading it..

  • XXElleXX on Dec 10, 2009

    An excellent piece of poetry for Duff’s Challenge Darla :-)

  • The Last Ogre on Dec 10, 2009

    Quite terrifying indeed. Next time… bring me with you lol

    Good poem, Madame.

  • Kate Smedley on Dec 10, 2009

    Another challenge well met – great poem!

  • Duff D Moss on Dec 13, 2009

    That was lovely. It was very descriptive – I could really visualise it. Great work. Thanks so much for your support of the challenge this year Darla.

  • Butterfly Musings on Dec 13, 2009

    this is beautiful!!!

  • miraj on Dec 14, 2009

    very scary indeed.great poem darla.

  • BradONeill on Dec 14, 2009

    Great work Darla I felt like I was walking along with you. Until the snake popped up then I was running as fast as I could the other direction!

  • hfj on Dec 14, 2009

    Nice poem for the challenge Darla. Well done.

  • oldster on Dec 15, 2009

    Well done Darla — Lovely poem.

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