How painful it is to learn that the love you’ve been waiting for had found someone new?

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Now I perfectly understand

Why you once said to me

“If we are really meant

for each other, then we’ll be”

*

Left me hanging in mid-air

With hope that one day

We’ll be together once more

Never to part again

*

Should have listen to them

Should have learn to stop

loving you since you left

But I was such a fool

*

How stupid I am

Followed the beat of my heart

I waited for you 

not knowing you had no plan

to comeback since you left

*

It hurts to know

you’ve someone new

It hurts…

It really hurts

and its killing me slowly

*

But still, I want to say

“THANK YOU”

From the bottom of my heart

“THANK YOU”

For the joy and the love we shared

“THANK YOU”

For becoming part of my life

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Comments (14)
  • Josey on Aug 19, 2009

    touching!

  • Mr Ghaz on Aug 19, 2009

    Wonderful post!..very well presented and lovely poem. Thanx to you too…all the best..

  • Lex92 on Aug 19, 2009

    how beautiful and touching!

  • Melody SJAL on Aug 20, 2009

    How sweet and touching…

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 20, 2009

    Such a sad and touching piece.

  • xoxo on Aug 20, 2009

    Heartfelt and beautiful :)

  • Moses Ingram on Aug 20, 2009

    You write very well, this ia a touching poem..

  • PR Mace on Aug 20, 2009

    A sad yet touching heartfelt piece. You have a powerful soul.

  • kate smedley on Aug 20, 2009

    Such a sad and touching poem.

  • Juancav on Aug 20, 2009

    Moving poem.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 20, 2009

    nobert, your poem is sad and touching, You go and live it up. There are more girls out there than fish in the sea, and many are looking for a good guy just like you,

  • monica55 on Aug 21, 2009

    Oh how that hurts, but time will help you to heal. A great piece of writing.
    Monica.

  • Goodselfme on Aug 22, 2009

    Hurting gives us the character to be a better person for the RIGHT person that will be coming along to care about you the way you care. Well expressed poem with a deeply professed hurt.

  • CutestPrincess on Sep 1, 2009

    very heartfelt…

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