A person finds herself in a dark place and is fearful of the things around her. She becomes relieved to find out that things were not what she had previously thought.

My fear rages,

and goes through stages.

My breath quickens

and my heart beckons.

The chill within my bones

are echoed tones

like mere stones.

I cannot see

with my naked eye

that which could be sly.

Alone in the damp mugginess.

The tree-tops appear to float

in the fogginess.

Adrenaline pumps into my limbs

as my sight consistently dims.

Why oh why did I come here?

I wipe away a single tear.

I decide to start walking,

staying in the shadows of the trees.

I can’t help noticing the cool breeze

cooling my hot cheeks

in sort of a tease.

My eyes play tricks

with the changing light.

I should not have come out

this night.

I Kick rocks by the roadside,

lit up by the moon.

I must reach home soon.

Each time a car would pass

I jumped into a ditch,

knowing not where I would land

in the blackening pitch.

I walk for what seems like an eternity.

All of a sudden

something comes into view.

A light up ahead.

and a picture I’ve seen

above my bed.

How could this be,

in the middle of nowhere?

I’m so confused

and I then begin to weep.

I want so badly to sleep.

In an instant my body starts to shake

and I fitfully become awake.

I awaken to my daughter

calling my name,

and trying to shake me awake.

A flashlight is just inches from my face.

I see the picture

and then realize

that it had been a dream.

I am so relieved to be back

and in my bed.

It wouldn’t matter

if it were a shack.

I am just thankful to be back.

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  • Stan Wilson on Dec 15, 2009

    welcome back…this is a very lovely poem, can relate to it in our childhood dreams…still have dreams as a adult but now the threats seem ever more increasing and real…lovely writings…awesome

  • M Dalton on Dec 15, 2009

    Great idea . Fine job

  • jimbob1 on Dec 15, 2009

    DB…thank goodness for a wonderful ending…I found this rather terrifying and didn’t realize it until I finished reading that I had actually been holding my breath…a different kind of poem from your bountiful pen. Thanks.

  • Midie on Dec 16, 2009

    Sometimes dreaming a thriller is quite fun.:D

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