Thanks Friend is just thanking friends.

Image by katmere via Flickr

Thanks friend 

Now I am far 

in the distant eternity

and

so have no pity…

nor  do I seek mercy

nor sympathy.


I am relieved of the torments

of the lop- sided world 

and

now I am a totally free bird

in this vast universe 

time  for poetry now is  worse.  

so much to do 

so little time 

who will ever wait for myself

lhlhlh’s chime

but alas  for a few friends like you

lhlhlh will  still continue.

Image by Aaron Gustafson via Flickr

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  • TwiKnight on Jun 17, 2010

    Great write, mate.

  • Vaibhav Diwaker on Jun 17, 2010

    lovely piece with fitting photograph……..keep it up…….

  • babygirl3605 on Jun 17, 2010

    Nice one. Liked it.

  • ashucharu on Jun 17, 2010

    nice one :)

  • drelayaraja on Jun 17, 2010

    Poetry may gives us very little from tirond, but gives peace and satisfaction to the poet that his poem is published and seen by many.

  • Tim P Stavert on Jun 17, 2010

    Good Work LH
    Itsputting poetic skills to use with the added photos.

    Tim

  • Michael Eboh on Jun 17, 2010

    Great share! Thanks for the share.

  • wonder on Jun 17, 2010

    A good share.

  • pattiann on Jun 17, 2010

    Wonderful poem. I also liked the pictures. You always pick nice pictures for your poems, thank you for making my day.

  • Yalonda on Jun 17, 2010

    Glad you’re back!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 18, 2010

    You welcome, any time.

  • Pam Stushnoff on Jun 18, 2010

    Nicely done.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 18, 2010

    thanks to all of u 4 ur appreciation

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