A poem.

I need a girl

To love me at night

To love me everyday

That girl needs to be you

My heart tells me

You are that girl

Come and let’s share our love

Nothing matters,

Only our love.

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  • Cara on Jul 13, 2009

    I like this poem it have a little flavor to it. I like that.Keep up the good work. hopefully u can check some of my poems out and see what you think.

  • ken bultman on Jul 13, 2009

    nice poem

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 13, 2009

    Lovely work,romantic.I sure hope this girl appreciates you!You write beautiful poetry for her.

  • Beth Suess on Jul 14, 2009

    Great piece!

  • OhSugar on Jul 14, 2009

    Love is wonderful as long as it is mutual. I hope she feels the same way too. Nice poem.

  • irishpen on Jul 14, 2009

    This is so romantic.
    I hope she gets how lovely you seem to be~

    ~peace~

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