That Goes The Mosquito

Starpisces on Dec 31, 2010

Tags: disturb, insects, mosquitoes, night, sleep, smack

I have to apologise to the ancient China Tang Dynasty poet Li Bai, as my first line here is a direct translation from one of his famous poems, though the rest of the lines, obviously are not.
Hope you like this one. By the way, it did not happened last night but earlier night.

Bed front bright moon light

Mosquitoes disturb whole night

Twist from left to right

Trying to sleep tight

Eee here comes the mosquito

Eee there my sleep goes

Eee here comes a hard Smack!

Ha ha ha that goes that insect!

my recent post :

http://authspot.com/poetry/two-zero-one-one-here-you-come/

http://authspot.com/poetry/my-talking-diary/

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LCM Linda on Dec 31, 2010
Star, what a coincidence. Mosquito kissed me several times last night. Pity that I failed to reward him to heaven. So, he may send unauthorized kiss tonight. ~ Sigh ~ Happy New Year to you. Happy always, my friend.
Starpisces on Jan 1, 2011
thanks Linda, happy new year to you too.
So far, mosquito is the only living thing that I will kill, I think…
Val Mills on Jan 1, 2011
LOL, great way to end the year, being eaten by mosquitoes! Wonderful little poem, you never fail to make me smile. Happy New Year to you.
SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 1, 2011
They are so fast. lol
papaleng on Jan 1, 2011
^_^, so full of humor. I hate mosquito bites. it’s so itchy..
Christine Ramsay on Jan 1, 2011
I know the feeling well. Mosquitoes seem to love me when I go on holiday to Italy in the summer. I am always covered in bites when I return home. A really cute poem.

Christine
Suni51 on Jan 1, 2011
A very sweet one, I love your poem…..
kamlesh786 on Jan 1, 2011
right my friend
Brenda Nelson on Jan 1, 2011
awe.. that mosquito might have wanted to live!
CA Johnson on Jan 1, 2011
This is really cute. This describes the way I feel when a mosquito is buzzing around me.
TwiKnight on Jan 2, 2011
Quang qian ming yue guang… Good one, mate!
albert1jemi on Jan 2, 2011
Very interesting share.
Jimmy Shilaho on Jan 3, 2011
Hmmmmmmmh, mosquitoes have bad manners and should be smacked like you did. You really make fun of everything. Don’t you?
wonder on Jan 3, 2011
How do you sleep tight while I am awake? Good mosquitoes, I’ll write another poem for them,ok?

A lovely creative piece as always.
Eunice Tan on Jan 3, 2011
Ha..ha.. you are really talented. Li Bai from Singapore
lillyrose on Jan 3, 2011
smackingly great poem!
lillyrose on Jan 3, 2011
smackingly great poem!
Tulan on Jan 3, 2011
Yah, one less to bite me.
Citra Florenca on Jan 3, 2011
Oh, I love the ending. Epic!
Brewed Coffee on Jan 3, 2011
Splat!!! Nothing like catching a mosquito as it bites on your skin.
gaby7 on Jan 4, 2011
A nice little poem!
Jewelstar on Jan 5, 2011
lol Eeee a BIG one biting my toe, while I write this comment. But I missed giving it a pass to heaven.
J M Lennox on Jan 6, 2011
It’s amazing how something so small can be so very annoying. They even have the audacity to warn you they are coming (like a dive bomber) – lol.

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