This one is for my uncle, who thinks he is the best golfer in the world, yet he still just can’t seem to get himself one of these…

That feeling so sweet that’s deep in your soul

Nothing but you and that one simple goal

In your mind that task is already done

You Knew from the start that this was the one 

You look at the ball and swing once or twice

Making sure your swing is sweet and precise

You pause for a second to look for your spot

That one and only space for that one perfect shot 

Stepping to the ball you put your club in it’s place

Waiting for that moment that your heart starts to race

You pull back your club with such style and grace

And let loose your fury like it’s a battle hardened mace 

The ball soars high as it’s sent on it’s way

Instantly you know you will remember this day

That feeling so sweet that’s deep in your soul

When that ball bounces twice and drops in the hole

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  • ShadowPsychos on May 22, 2010

    nice one :)

  • mitchey179 on May 22, 2010

    I am searching for that one myself. Good 1.

  • Joie Schmidt on May 22, 2010

    Very fun & cute poem!



    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Christine Ramsay on May 23, 2010

    I really loved that piece. You captured the feeling so well.


  • Colleen Ranney on May 23, 2010

    Hurray! Great poem

  • sara20 on May 24, 2010

    You wrote an interesting poem, are well as an interesting way to write and I’d encourage you to write further.

  • lindalulu on May 25, 2010

    Nice one!

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