Am I asking too much?

Please love me only
Always make me happy
Say you love me always
And don’t ever desert me
That’s all I ask of you
Please don’t make me cry
Don’t even bade goodbye
Or rather tell me lies
That’s all I ask of you
Please be sincere
Stay honest my dear
And be faithful forever
That’s all I ask of you
Please love me tender
Stay thoughtful and sweet
Always be true
And don’t make me blue
That’s all I ask of you
I just can’t carry on
With my life all alone
Because you’re the only one
I love under the sun
So please don’t tell me lie
Don’t ever say goodbye
The moment you’ll do I cry
The moment you’re gone I’ll die.

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  • tracy sardelli on Apr 28, 2008

    beautifully written, so intense.

  • salvatore on Apr 28, 2008

    brilliant poem buddy,

  • quiet voice on Apr 28, 2008

    …out of the depths of
    your soul. Take care

  • Alexa Gates on Apr 28, 2008

    very beautiful!!

  • Lucy Lockett on Apr 28, 2008

    Another well written poem! Good job.

  • Clarice Fernandez on Apr 29, 2008

    ganda naman………

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 30, 2008

    Tracy,quiet voice,Alexa,Lucy Clarice and Salvatore,
    thank you so much for your wonderful comments..

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