Something I wrote a while ago. It’s about different views of personality.

I’m the girl you can’t meet,

The one who loves to hide and seek.

I’m the girl you might end up loving,

Hating, fighting, crying, cuddling.

I’m the cute, the princess the beauty.

I’m the mean, the liar, the bitch.

I am everything and I am nothing,

But I’m more than you’ll ever be.

I think that’s why you like judging,

but it just won’t bother me.

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  • writing4angels on Aug 5, 2009

    Very well written except that “the girl you can’t meet” will be envied by many.

  • Marie Milton on Aug 11, 2009

    Nice work! sometimes it’s better for people not to know who we really are : )
    There’s nothing wrong with mysterious…heheeha.

    Take Care
    Marie

  • Emma Green on Aug 11, 2009

    I really enjoyed this. Good work!

  • maranatha on Aug 11, 2009

    I enjoyed it also. You sound very secure in who you are, and what you want others to see. Well done!

  • BenJammin14 on Aug 16, 2009

    cool!

  • ducroisjosef on Aug 18, 2009

    Yeah, I liked this. It reminds me of that song by Meredeth Brooks “I’m a bitch I’m a lover”. Good job.

  • Shamanz on Sep 9, 2009

    Good work on this poem. The Image and message was clear. Way to go.

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