The Advices I Get

LOVELYHONEY on Oct 25, 2009

Poetry L.H.style.

The advices I get

Some times I give away the impression

That perhaps I want

To make history overnight

Some say I am prolific

Others say stay out of sight.

Those who get angry at me

They want to return

They are so very kind to say

We’re sorry please continue

To write also for me

Some others want me to help

Change the thinking over here,

I really can’t do much

As many think of earning

More every year

But what are a few cents

Between friends

When we exchange common sense

When we exchange

What we are adept at

Then the world will accept

What I am out to do,

Share knowledge my friends

With all of you

The world is yours

Compare not me,

An ancient person

With yourself of modern generation

But share all that you know

From your knowledge alone

My mind does glow.

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Comments (14)

ceegirl on Oct 25, 2009
nice
T.Rex McGoogle on Oct 25, 2009
I like this thoughtful verse.
chitragopi on Oct 25, 2009
Good poem
cardy on Oct 26, 2009
A fab write from you like you\’re thoughts a good read
Christine Ramsay on Oct 26, 2009
An enjoyable read. Well done.

Christine
papaleng on Oct 26, 2009
Well-said my friend.
K.Reshma on Oct 26, 2009
Well said, dear friend
Petalm on Oct 26, 2009
I like this one, and very personal.
Frances Lawrence on Oct 26, 2009
This was a very interesting poem, very thoughtful.
Darla Cooke on Oct 26, 2009
Very nice poem.
Nydia Esther on Oct 26, 2009
very nicely done
Faith Hodge on Oct 26, 2009
Always a kind word to say. You do.
Alexiandria M Michaels on Oct 26, 2009
enjoyed reading this.
mo hoyal on Oct 26, 2009
Another thoughtful poem from you. I am enjoying reading what you write.
I also feel a citizen of the world and never took offence when Mr. Obama said he was-a lot of people misunderstood what he meant when he said this. More people should have love and concern and become people of the world. Good job!

Hi there!