Come on Ladies shake your hips.

A trip to the gym for the aerobics hour

And then all together for a splash in the shower

Chatting about diets and swapping recipes

Munching on sandwiches stuffed full of cheese

How much will we lose they wonder, this week

Will we all have to change, our dietary technique

Disappointment reigns high, as the results are announced

Never mind we all say, same time next week for another bounce

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Comments (17)
  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 3, 2010

    Nice, the picture made me laugh.

  • giftarist on Mar 3, 2010

    Good one. and nice gif.

  • Val Mills on Mar 3, 2010

    LOL! You’ve been spying.

  • Lady Sunshine on Mar 3, 2010

    lmao!

  • AlmaG on Mar 3, 2010

    That is so cute Johnny ^_^

  • pattiann on Mar 3, 2010

    This is a really good poem. I liked how the women went to areobics then blew their diet. Great job!

  • ken bultman on Mar 3, 2010

    Perhaps should be the aerobics two hour.

  • ken bultman on Mar 3, 2010

    Maybe it should be the aerobics two-hour.

  • krrymarie on Mar 3, 2010

    haha!!! great poem sounds a bit like me lol!

  • pen2010 on Mar 3, 2010

    interesting

  • standingproud on Mar 3, 2010

    Bloody awesome, hahahaha.

  • Jenilia12 on Mar 3, 2010

    Funny one.

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 4, 2010

    lol, this is too funny, Johnny.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 4, 2010

    Ha ha! That’s so funny. A great piece, Johnny.

    Christine

  • sambhafusia on Mar 4, 2010

    Excellent share.well done

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 4, 2010

    Great poem! :)

  • albert1jemi on Mar 8, 2010

    good poem

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