When hearts collide.


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When hearts collide in a mad rush
In a shower of fireworks, in sparks
That rock, the earth
Hearts shudder, and run to take cover
Not knowing when or if the bombs
Will swiftly take over
Explode suddenly from which
One may never fully recover

She smiles in the dust,
In the aftermath, he left behind
She drags her feet in the wreckage
In the debris,
It just wasn’t meant to be

And her heart hardens once more
The edges grow wings
While catapults pull her up
When she forgets to attach the strings

Oh, his word was not worth the gun powder
He paid to shoot her down
His eyes gazed upon her
Just to, easily turn away without a sound
But her waters manage somehow
To remain pure, quietly profound

Take another shot; make it your best aim
Don’t look away, don’t hesitate
She will always come out stronger
She’s a survivor despite the arrows
That attempt to maim

Keep marching, keep saluting
Keep wondering
Through the rain

Keep promising, keep crying
Keep holding her
Through the pain

One more step, closer toward you
One more moment, spent swimming
In the river blue

In the aftermath, he left behind
Cannons fire, threatening the silence

She remains standing
While the hills continue
To echo the same

She will never change.

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  • Unofre Pili on Nov 8, 2008

    Like a classic free verse.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 8, 2008

    Again, good poem here! Thanks and take care!

  • papaleng on Nov 8, 2008

    I really enjoy reading your poems, you do have a unique writing style and gosh this one has depth.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Nov 8, 2008

    another beautiful piece of poetry

  • Will Gray on Nov 8, 2008

    So unique and full of emotion!

  • goodselfme on Nov 8, 2008

    Powerful messages showing much strength of the subject within.Your flow is free flowing throughout too.

  • Inna Tysoe on Nov 8, 2008

    That was very good. Well done.

    Best,

    Inna

  • Debbie Mann on Nov 8, 2008

    A beautiful poem. Nicely written. Good work, Liane! God bless!

  • R J Grant on Nov 8, 2008

    Verse is good as always but the picture says it all before I read the verse. Great choice!

    Grant

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 8, 2008

    Very powerful imagery adorning this piece. Continuing on in the face of adversity. Nice write!

    -M

  • Lauren Axelrod on Nov 8, 2008

    Wonderful flow Liane

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 8, 2008

    Your poem is straight forward and great imagery. Take care, Ruby

  • gabbic1219 on Nov 8, 2008

    very beautiful,i love your flow…it is always gracious!

  • Darlene McFarlane on Nov 8, 2008

    Wow! This is superb! It’s touching. It’s full of emotion. I loved it from the first word to the last.

    Darlene

  • eddiego65 on Nov 8, 2008

    Lovely poem as usual.

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Nov 8, 2008

    May the pedals re-collect into a symphony that warms the heart anew.

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Nov 9, 2008

    and besides…we men can sometimes be just plain jerks!!

  • XxAcexX on Nov 9, 2008

    Never really liked poems,

    But I gotta admit.

    This was very good!

  • tilted on Nov 9, 2008

    This was AMAZING i loved it please read some of mine i think you will like a few

  • Gail Nobles on Nov 9, 2008

    I loved it. Very beautiful.

  • jhenz on Nov 9, 2008

    very touching. i like best how you translate it to all women out there! :)

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Nov 10, 2008

    All i can say is…you are really a good poet, Lianne. God bless.

  • Poetic Enigma on Nov 12, 2008

    this is an amazing poem,
    wonderfully said, and it flows so well,
    purely beautiful.

  • Ben Johnson on Nov 14, 2008

    Very Talented I am jealousy ;)

  • joystick7 on Nov 14, 2008

    Really nice!

  • Debbie Berk on Nov 21, 2008

    Nicely done.

  • Parish Loveless on Nov 30, 2008

    Love it

  • Fegger on Jan 9, 2009

    “..her heart hardens…while edges grow wings”–capturing the essence of quick resolve—tying the binding to stop the flow of fate’s blood, eh? Once again, beautiful–I may be a dutiful fan of your work–or, at least, your spirited heart!

  • OhSugar on Apr 3, 2009

    “She’s a survior,dispite the arrows.” Profound sentence. I love it.

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