Miles to go before I sleep… seems to be the theme of this poem.

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The Amazing Gap

A lone bird flying high above

Feels proud of

Having conquered the vast space;

Little does it realize that

It is only a tiny speck in the sky,

Or only a wave in the eternal sea.

As I behold it,

I am only reminded

Of the vastness of the empire

Yet to be traversed by it,

Like my own soul’s

Extent of unfinished

Spiritual flight.

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  • FX777222999 on Dec 18, 2011

    The flight of a lonely bird.

  • Vinaya says good bye on Dec 18, 2011

    Beautiful!

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 18, 2011

    Very nice.

  • yes me on Dec 18, 2011

    Once more a very good piece cheers for this one

  • whoisbid on Dec 25, 2011

    yeh.. it is good to be able to see things from more than one perspective and that there can be no conflict with two opposing ideas

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 10, 2012

    When I see birds I see the freedom to discover any place I want to see. Why do we feel so grounded as humans? I think it’s because social obligations bind us.

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