What will a description do to the audiences mind when the answers however maybe apparent? After some time I may discuss exactly what certain lines and / or the whole piece means. But like other writings, isn’t that the mystery that captivates us to be creative?

Checking after the barrles of gasoline
Pondering about urban ravage paintings
The barrels o’ fun is going to be very mean
Time to set the fuse getting HIM very tempting
Lock and load now its time to rock and roll
Firing round after round into chests of mortality
HE has gone insane but does anyone really know?

This pain is reallity getting HIM through
Our false savior has coralled us home
Taunting images trenching deeper, ready to move?
Somber losses of time? Forced to stay alone?

What brought HIM here is democracy
what HE wants is alittle monstrosity
what it is, the flame wont just burn out
Not until HE has his final bout

The fuel is scorching hotter
The rules of the table are turning
Rules of morale, we the people are burning
HE evolved to punish us for awhile longer

This pain is reallity getting HIM through
Our false savior has coralled us home
Taunting images trenching deeper, ready to move?
Somber losses of time? Forced to stay alone?

No game this is, Is it us or HIM?

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  • paige ambre hogya on May 7, 2010

    very good i’m going out but i’ll read the other ones when i get home

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