Pain, confusion, lost love.

Is not my pain enough for you??!!
You wretched horror,
You tormenting spirit of blabbering spit!

Can you not see the anguish in my heart??!
The reaping of my blood that contains my love??
For you…. you twit!!

Will you not feel the sense of despair i feel??
When your words rip out the very essence of our existence
And kill

Can you deny the love we share, we shared?
We submitted
At will

Oh my dearest angel, you have bled my soul!
Cast me aside
Like waste?

Ought i to beg you… take me back?!!
Do not separate this infinity…
In haste

Or is it too late…?

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  • Martin Kloess on Oct 10, 2011

    i like it. though i feel one more, Kill, Will,?

  • Mastema01 on Oct 10, 2011

    harsh words can kill things off, romance, love, desire.. can be destroyed by a simple word said in haste or mallice
    the relationship was once mutual, united by each others will to make it last, unfortunatly it didn’t last
    if that makes sense eh?
    not really sure what you ment by your comment, but am glad you enjoyed.
    Be well.
    ~M~

  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 15, 2011

    Nice poem..

  • Mastema01 on Oct 15, 2011

    Ty ;)

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