Thoughts

This is not a poem. These are just thoughts.

Alone she stands

In front of her full length mirror

Emaciated as she looks

Her distorted mind thinks otherwise

What would life be like If I were thinner

Would people like me better

Will I be as well off as my older sister

She then falls down to the floor

And she can not be aroused for she is dead

From pure malnutrition and starvation

The anorexic girl is no more

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  • johnnydod on Dec 3, 2009

    its such a sad illness

  • Liz Sapphire on Dec 3, 2009

    Yes, I agree with you. Going anorexic just for your looks is not healthy for you. Thanks for sharing

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