The Approach

Dstruidor on Jan 8, 2012

Even if the world will fall apart I will stand for what is mine and what I believe in.

a gentle approach that condemns

the truth to be sacrificed

so be stiff and angry in mind

to never let go that what should

this passion is what I am

what I am is what I do

Because If I ever let go

that what is important

the same will happen to

all that is precious

to you and more

to be recalled

Armando

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VisionsToPonder on Jan 9, 2012
Some beautiful words. What I suggest is to go through it again, double check for typos, add in punctuation, and to capitalize where needed. This will make your writing appear more professional and will make it easier to read.
Dstruidor on Jan 13, 2012
In a way you are right but at the same time a bit wrong, I write it in a different form than that is shown and still don’t really know how to correct that when writing. But even if the form is off that doesn’t mean that the meaning changes. I write not just to tell you what I think and feel but hopefully poems to which you can relate yourself.
That is my main reason to post my poems on the internet. That said it doesn’t mean I don’t listen to the tips you have given me, they help me to rethink about why I’m writing and how I’m writing.
For that I thank you and hope I explained my own ideas a little bit so you can understand and relate to my writing a bit more.

Armando

Hi there!