The Attack Almost Killed Me

Teresa M Sims on Apr 11, 2009

Tags: asthma, Inhaler, knees down, puff, slap pushed

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I’m being attacked every time the weather changes or dust kicks up. Asthma can be deadly.

It slap me and I slap it back.

It pushed me so I shoved it back.

It knocked me down to my knees.

But Im not strong enough now to push back.

Barely reaching for my inhaler and taking a puff

I told Mr.Asthma enough is enough

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papaleng on Apr 11, 2009
its nice to read this kind of article.
CutestPrincess on Apr 15, 2009
my father suffering from asthma today… i feel sad!
meachy on May 6, 2009
dont want to die

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