Opportunities…

Friday evening

It is dark already

and noone sees

the young woman

standing on that

balcony

She knows now is

her chance because

noone will know,

notice or even care

She is crying but as

she is standing there

she starts to smile

because the pressure

is just suddenly gone

Gravity and the cold,

dark night are her friends

and she knows her friends

are going to make it easier

because there is still that

small nagging voice inside

her telling her not to do it

So she climbs on the edge of

the balcony and is just standing

there for a few minutes because

this is taking a bit more courage

than she bargained for

Then she is surrounded by nothing

but freedom….

This endless feeling of freedom

Noone ever found out that she is

no longer there

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  • Pierre / Ed Hardy Social Media on Sep 16, 2011

    Hey there I am Pierre Cordero from Ed Hardy Social Media, and just thanking you for responding to our post a few weeks ago. I read a few of your posts and I liked this one. Did not see a way I could e-mail you and possible send you a free gift for responding but maybe you could email me if you would like me to send you something. Webrelations@donedhardy.com. Thanks for the good read.

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