Weaving a web…

She weaved a web
With her golden hair
And there he lives now
With his Lonely Love
Until Death will do
Them Part.

While you read the poem, listen to the French chanson about how a Black Widow (Veuve Noire) loves her lover… until Death will do them part.

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  • Darlene McFarlane on Dec 6, 2008

    I read first without the music and then again with it. I like it with the accompaniment. So few words can say so much if they are presented well and you have done a wonderful job with this one, Patrick.

  • Lauren axelrod on Dec 8, 2008

    Fascinating piece. Sorry, short for words studying and surfing

  • Joanna Maharis on Dec 20, 2008

    Not only is this piece of writing beautiful, but I found it to be deeply moving.

    Take Care,

    Joanna Maharis

  • Matt H on Dec 22, 2008

    Very beautiful and emotional :)

    ~Matt

  • Mercedes Selvira on Jan 1, 2009

    Interesting–in a good way :)

  • Kim Buck on Jan 7, 2009

    Dark and almost raunchy! Love it.

  • C Jordan on Jan 20, 2009

    The words are good but the accompanying audio on your site is superb

  • Lost in Arizona on Mar 15, 2009

    I believe the music almost enhances the poem.. almost dark in a way, and certainly brings new meaning to ’til death do we part’…lol!

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