Possibly follows structure perfectly, not sure.

There once was a man named McNeil,
He slipped on a banana peel.
He went down face first,
but he hit some soft dirt;
so he still seems slick as an eel.

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  • Shamanz on Sep 20, 2009

    hehe, that’s cool. Fun and short, I like your style.

  • etheral76 on Jan 15, 2011

    Thanks for the smile you put on my face through your limmerick!

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