A lovely band I wish they could play for me too.

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            The band  of ours

            How I wish

I was that young

For u to accommodate me

Never mind

I send u my young heart

Packed in ice cream

It will be as if

’There a dream,

As you scream

My, the ice will melt

And my heart will turn

Into cream

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  • neet on Nov 5, 2009

    Great poem.

  • Teves on Nov 5, 2009

    I could play it for you Honey. Very nice poem…I like your photos.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 5, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 5, 2009

    Aww,that was sweet.Great images :)

  • K.Reshma on Nov 5, 2009

    Very nice poem

  • diamondpoet on Nov 5, 2009

    Nice write, and very interesting.

  • Tracey Parece on Nov 5, 2009

    Interesting poem. I like it alot- the juxtaposition of love and ice cream.

  • Themax on Nov 5, 2009

    Very good point thanks :)

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