The tireless, constant movement of the Barbados Ocean can be totally mesmerizing!

This is a follow up to “The Barbados Ocean (Haiku)” on the amazing colors of the sea that I published in Authspot (

Thank you for the great comments that so many of you posted on this piece and on “After the Rain (Haiku) also in Authspot (

I would love to know what you think of this one!

Bright colour dancing 

Playing leaping and bounding

Seeking and searching

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  • lauralu on Aug 8, 2012

    Perfect haiku and really expressive.

  • Jswana on Aug 8, 2012

    I think its is very beautiful. :)

  • Martin Kloess on Aug 8, 2012

    Good work thank you for sharing.

  • LCM Linda on Aug 8, 2012

    That’s lovely. An enjoyable read.

  • KittyK on Aug 8, 2012

    Truly lovely…

  • elee on Aug 9, 2012

    wonderful writing

  • JCEvangelista on Aug 9, 2012

    Keep up the good work :)

    Can I request? If you can, make a haiku about love. It doesn’t really have to be sweet love, it can be any form of love. Thanks!~

  • Sustainable Living on Aug 12, 2012

    Thanks so much everyone for all the great comments. They are really, really appreciated.

    I’m so glad you enjoyed my work. I continue to enjoy your writing too.

    JCEvangelista – Thanks for the request for the special Haiku – am thinking about what I can write.

    Stay well.

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