THE Barbados Ocean: Dancing AND Leaping (Haiku)

Sustainable Living on Aug 8, 2012

Tags: Barbados, Color, dancing, ocean, searching

The tireless, constant movement of the Barbados Ocean can be totally mesmerizing!

This is a follow up to “The Barbados Ocean (Haiku)” on the amazing colors of the sea that I published in Authspot (http://authspot.com/poetry/the-barbados-ocean-haiku/).

Thank you for the great comments that so many of you posted on this piece and on “After the Rain (Haiku) also in Authspot (http://authspot.com/poetry/after-the-rain-haiku/).

I would love to know what you think of this one!

Bright colour dancing

Playing leaping and bounding

Seeking and searching

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lauralu on Aug 8, 2012
Perfect haiku and really expressive.
Jswana on Aug 8, 2012
I think its is very beautiful.
Martin Kloess on Aug 8, 2012
Good work thank you for sharing.
LCM Linda on Aug 8, 2012
That’s lovely. An enjoyable read.
KittyK on Aug 8, 2012
Truly lovely…
elee on Aug 9, 2012
wonderful writing
JCEvangelista on Aug 9, 2012
Keep up the good work

Can I request? If you can, make a haiku about love. It doesn’t really have to be sweet love, it can be any form of love. Thanks!~
Sustainable Living on Aug 12, 2012
Thanks so much everyone for all the great comments. They are really, really appreciated.

I’m so glad you enjoyed my work. I continue to enjoy your writing too.

JCEvangelista – Thanks for the request for the special Haiku – am thinking about what I can write.

Stay well.

THE Barbados Ocean: Dancing AND Leaping (Haiku)

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