THE Barbados Ocean: THE Sinking SUN (Haiku)

Sustainable Living on Aug 11, 2012

As the sun goes down, sadness as the colors fade is replaced by gratitude for the tranquility of the Barbados Ocean at night.

Well, I think this is the last of “The Barbados Ocean (Haiku)” series – unless I wake up suddenly in the night with another one in my head!

Over the next couple of days, I’ll be finishing the “After the Rain (Haiku)” series.

I’ve really been enjoying the Haiku (and other forms of poetry) that some of you are writing.

As always, a huge thank you for all of your encouraging feebback!

Sun slowly sinking

Brightness fading to grey black

Light now reflecting

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lauralu on Aug 11, 2012
Beautiful haiku ^_^
stevetheblogger on Aug 11, 2012
Sorry to see this is the last in this series really enjoyed
Best Wishes
stevetheblogger
Martin Kloess on Aug 11, 2012
Thank you for this.
smokychristine on Aug 11, 2012
So beautiful. We can really see the sun sinking.
Jswana on Aug 12, 2012
Sweet and beautiful. Like the last commenter, I too can always feel what you say!
elee on Aug 12, 2012
Well written. Thank you.
Kristie Claar on Aug 29, 2012
Good work.
Sustainable Living on Sep 1, 2012
Thanks everyone for all of your wonderful comments! Really appreciated.
elee on Sep 4, 2012
very sweet and with beautiful similes

Hi there!