The Beautiful Green.

The dominance of green can be noticeable
With sparkles of colors of different shades
A beauty that is truly unbelievable
Imprinting a memory that never fades.

But will it still be after a storm blows in?
The wind and the trees, battling and fighting
In the harsh struggle, who would win?
Would elegance remain in the outcome arriving?

The clashing continues as trees fight on
BUt the powerful Wind crushes their souls
Alas, the fight ends, for one has won.
Helpless and feeble, the damaged tree falls.

Scattered, Ruptured by a brute,
Remnants of brilliance displaying misery.
What once was refreshing now cannot soothe
BUt who can flee from death’s reality

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  • chennysan on May 24, 2011

    it sent a chill down my spine! Gotta really push ourselves to do something for our environment before its too late!
    BTW the first picture is lovely..love the colour contrast! striking!

  • papaleng on May 25, 2011

    a good descriptive poem, Meroon pa naman sigurong maiiwan na green kapag bumagyo, Damo..

  • Starpisces on May 25, 2011

    beautiful poem and pictures here, well done, Denise.
    ;)

  • dame016 on May 25, 2011

    Great poem, haydenise. :) I like the emotion gradient that you have integrated into your poem — from beauty to disaster. The pictures created an effect as well. Nice siya.

  • Allen Harriet1 on Aug 8, 2011

    amazing

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