A man loses more than his love.

He sits and thinks of man he used to know
That met a girl who’d one day change his life
He promised her he’d never let her go
As time went by engaged her as his wife
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The day was blessed by sound of wedding bells
When on a book he swore they’d never part
He still recalls the feelings and the swells
This love to whom he’d dedicate his heart
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It’s still unclear when challenges began
With each regret came worse one than before
Heartaches and tears was not within their plan
So all they were was swept through open door
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Funeral bells were mourning on that day
When he and layers signed a man away

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  • Kai Vicky on Aug 18, 2012

    Quite a meaningful poem. And a good one as usual.

  • Jswana on Aug 18, 2012

    Beautiful and of course, sad, but beauty in its expression. Thanks for sharing. :)

  • Tulan on Aug 18, 2012

    Sad, and it happens to the best of us.

  • smokychristine on Aug 18, 2012

    Which is worse: death or the death of love? Very emotional poem.

  • norlaw on Aug 18, 2012

    Very good

  • herjave01 on Aug 18, 2012

    Heart-touching. I would not know what to do if either love dies or someone I love dies. It would all be too much.

  • lauralu on Aug 18, 2012

    You have depths and realms still to write about that some will never reach ^_^

  • lapasan on Aug 19, 2012

    A happy union that ended in sorrow.

  • JCEvangelista on Aug 19, 2012

    Good job :)

  • Eiddwen on Aug 19, 2012

    Grat work as always Martin.
    Enjoy your weekend.
    Eddy.

  • Eiddwen on Aug 19, 2012

    Grat work as always Martin.
    Enjoy your weekend.

  • Eiddwen on Aug 19, 2012

    Great work as always Martin.
    Enjoy your weekend.

  • gaby7 on Aug 19, 2012

    Very captivating!

  • JCEvangelista on Aug 20, 2012

    Dark. Great work martin!

  • Kristie Claar on Aug 20, 2012

    Excellent

  • Marquis de Joker on Sep 17, 2012

    Forrest Gump: Mama always said, dying was a part of life.

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