There once was a man who wore a tutu, with a Hawaiian shirt…

He loved to dance,
And prance.
He moved to Hawaii,
Surfed some waves in his tutu.
When he bought a lance,
So he could prance and dance!
This is the story of the big man in the tutu wearing a Hawaiian shirt.

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  • James DeVere on Jan 13, 2009

    Mad, fun Aussie stuff. No rhyme or reason – good stuff…j

  • Poetic Angel on Jan 13, 2009

    sounds fun and adventurous..nice to have gotten away for a minute from sad poetry to read a silliness.. good job

  • Darla Smith on Jan 13, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Joni Keith on Jan 13, 2009

    A nice light way to start my day. Thanks, Denus :D

  • James Timmons on Jan 13, 2009

    Definitely different yet good

  • believer on Jan 13, 2009

    HAHAHA…. the picture in my mind is brilliant! keep it up!

  • writingares on Jan 13, 2009

    reminds me about meh =) lol nah nah
    But that is funny

  • Fegger on Jan 13, 2009

    Do you personally grow everything you smoke, or do actually have to buy now and then? :) } Too cool.

  • nutuba on Jan 17, 2009

    Haha, this is fun. Great job as always!

  • Dan D Man on Jan 20, 2009

    Nice vibes, python meets Bill and Ted, dude.

  • rutherfranc on Jan 21, 2009

    I get the picture mate!

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