This is a cute little poem about a mother who is trying to get her pre-teen to clean up her room. For anyone who is a parent, the rhyming format of dialogue will be sure to crack you up.

The birds in the treetops

A bee’s in the rose

I stand here staring

While you pick your nose.

The sun is shining

The flowers are a bloom

But all around me

Is the mess of your room.

I tell you to clean up

You bitch and moan

You flop on your bed

As you grumble and groan.

I tell you to rise

To get out of that bed

You start into your pouting

You toss around your head.

I stand here and shout

That you need to have class

You insist that you do

As you’re scratching your ass.

I laugh and nod

Walk out of the door

Close it behind me

As you now sit on the floor.

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