The Blossoms in Winter

bigpapadan on Dec 16, 2010

There upon a snowy field.

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There upon a snowy field,

the flowers petals willing yield;

their beauty risen from the snow,

promising for e’er to grow

and she delighted kissed him warm,

giving love a beauty form;

deeply wanting more of her,

he swore his love completely sure.

With bodies pressed together tight,

they held each other through the night;

and delighting in the breaking day,

she bid him hasten on his way

and gathering the petals fair,

she returned once more to heavens air;

singing songs of earthly love,

she took her place upon high above;

and sighing in her angels gown,

she planted seed upon the ground;

and when again the petals bloom,

the lovers waltz they will resume.

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Comments (8)

Frederick Dewar on Dec 16, 2010
I really like your style and use of imagery.
bigpapadan on Dec 16, 2010
Thanks Frederick, I love to write poetry.
uiputra on Dec 16, 2010
Love white as snow. May you always get it.
Davanita on Dec 16, 2010
That was beautiful. Amazing poem.
bigpapadan on Dec 16, 2010
Thank you both, I appreciate it.
lxdollarsxl on Dec 17, 2010
Now this one i really like – it stirs up the imagination
bigpapadan on Dec 17, 2010
thanks dollars, and the inspiration for this piece has found Triond! I am estatic.
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 22, 2010
i came by
through ur blog
and realised my folly

ur no old man sir
if poetry alone is your hobby
some may still call you bobby

but if love making is your hobby
i wonder why
for the poem
i did cry
awaiting the removal of the iv needle
perhaps your’e having fun
more than me
bigpapadan carry on
for i still praise thee ,
no, not you ,sire
your lovers poetry,
at this youth ful age
of just perhaps
a little over sixty
too old for me!

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